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Your descriptions of battles and strategies are superb. Logical and realistic. Remember that people love stories because the characters seem real. They see themselves as the characters. Always tell the reader not just what happens in the story, but how the characters FEEL and react about what happens. This gives the character depth and therefore reality.
Your descriptions of battles and strategies are superb. Logical and realistic. Remember that people love stories because the characters seem real. They see themselves as the characters. Always tell the reader not just what happens in the story, but how the characters FEEL and react about what happens. This gives the character depth and therefore reality.
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